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      • The title says JBoss Enterprise Application Platform 5.0, but it should be 5.1 (or just 5?)
      • Edition is 1.0 even though in 5.0.1 it was 2.0. I'm not sure what the edition refers to.
      • Edition is not displayed in the pdf version
      • Chapter 1.2.1.1, page 4, explanation item 6: "both" used twice in "An empty constructor is both required by both the EJB specification and by Seam."
      • Chapter 1.2.1.2, page 5, explanation item 8: "For complex application" – Shouldn't there be an article? Like "For a complex application"? (I'm no native speaker, I'm not sure)
      • Chapter 1.3.1.2, page 14, explanation item 3: "and the subsequently outjected" -> "and then subsequently outjected"
      • Chapter 1.5.1, page 29, "much more about that later" could point to the chapter dealing with the matter (Chapter 8)
      • Chapter 1.6.3, page 34, explanation item 4: "...must define a method with no parameters marked @Remove" suggests that there might be some parameters, but they cannot be marked @Remove. I think it's better to say "...must define a parameterless method marked @Remove"
      • Explanation item references (The red balls with a number inside) are not properly aligned in examples: 1.11, 1.17(#2,3), 1.20 (#4), 1.25 (#4), 1.26, 1.27, 1.28, 1.29, 1.30, 1.31,
      • Chapter 10.5, page 163: The warning code example is barely readable (dark violet text on almost black background). The same applies for chapter 15.6.5, page 214
      • Poor screenshot resolution in chapter 15.6.7, page 217
      • Missing right and/or left borders of many tables throughout the document
      • Chapter 1.7.2, page 45: comment on confirm() method "the room preference will be injected..." should start with a capital letter and one or two spaces earlier.
      • Throughout the document – Ehcache is probably the correct casing (not EHCache nor EhCache)
      • Chapter 24.2.1, page 328: function sayHello starts with invalid characters "//<" and ends with "//" (probably a leftover of CDATA escaping)
      • Chapter 4, page 75: "visit JBoss Developer Studio Getting Started Guide" should point to somewhere
      • Chapter 4.1, page 75: "...or JBDS 3.0. and the TestNG plugin..." remove the "." after the "3.0"
      • Chapter 4.2, page 76: "Again, in this case, we'll choose predefined JBoss Enterprise Application Platform from JBDS in this case" – remove one of the "in this case"
      • Chapter 4.2, page 78: "If you have an EJB3-ready application server like JBoss AS 5 installed" is somewhat invalid.
      • Chapter 4.4, page 85: The last sentence of this chapter ends with two full stops.
      • Chapter 4.5, page 85: "Select FileNew" -> "Select File -> New"
      • Chapter 2.2.1: The jars should be grouped together by relevance (eg openxri-*, resteasy,..)
      • Chapter 2.2.1: openxri-client.jar should be in bold
      • Chapter 2.2.1: Where did you get the list from? It doesn't seem to be up to date.

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              jaredmorgs_jira Jared Morgan (Inactive)
              oskutka@redhat.com Ondrej Skutka
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